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With Him Goes a Rose

It was only a few days On their barren soil Through a doorway he went So many lives now spoiled An explosive device Plastic in design Could never be detected Now a life resigns The regimental medic Rushes to his aid To stem his internal bleeding Through his eyes he fades His lifeless soul lies lonely As he is gently stretchered away Where he will be flown back home To where the angels play In honoured ceremony As he is carried to his carriage On the tarmac awaits His fiance, without marriage In the chapel of rest She stands in a tear laden pose Her tribute to her lost one With him goes a Rose For tomorrow she will awake A new day in her life As she remembers her love Who would have made her his wife http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/loss-2.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/19/2009 8:58:00 AM
Dear James: Being a vetran of the U.S. Army, I can connect with the message of your poem. Thank you for this wonderful, yet sad poem. Respectfully yours: Sheol
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Date: 11/18/2009 11:10:00 AM
Awesome write James, emotion, love loss, very well written, good job, Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 11/18/2009 6:46:00 AM
Aye a sad day. Thank you for kind comments on my poem just returned from holiday in Scotland. Robert (Rabbie)
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Date: 11/16/2009 1:23:00 PM
James, this is beautifully written. You are filled with such tenderness and warmth, and it certainly comes through in your work. Hugs, Donna
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Date: 11/16/2009 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured on the Hot Poem list with this great write. Very emotional and descriptive. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 11/14/2009 7:31:00 PM
This is a lovely poem James.. Pam
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Date: 11/14/2009 6:21:00 PM
I like this poem it's good :)
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Date: 11/14/2009 4:39:00 PM
The pain of losing our soldiers continue to grow each day and I wonder when will it all end. Thanks for sharing, James! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 11/14/2009 11:44:00 AM
Too sad. Too true. War's rue. Excellent write, James. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 11/14/2009 10:31:00 AM
fine write! James!
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Date: 11/14/2009 8:50:00 AM
Brilliant but tragic story happening too often today with the many wars in play... the sadness has a sweetness too ... it is better to have loved and lost (that love) than never to have loved at all.. her memories will sustain her.. and he will be with her always in spirit... love never stops .. it just takes a little hiatus until they meet again in another realm... excellent write.. glad u liked my Gibran poem.. His books are unique.. as your storytelling.. luv Linda-Marie..P.E.P.S. :Sweetie"
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Date: 11/14/2009 8:33:00 AM
Very emotional heartfelt write dear James. Touches ones heart deeply. Outstanding story line and Rhyme. Thanks for sharing. Keep up the good work! Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/14/2009 8:19:00 AM
This very heartfelt Sad poem,goes to my favs..So sad to lose someone so dear ,hope we all have time to share with our loved ones..before God takes us away-What the use of the flag on a coffin,the medals of bravery,,to bodies who are dead..deep write and a fav--Charma
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Date: 11/14/2009 7:58:00 AM
James - yet another fabulous piece filled with so much emotion. I just love the way you write. Look forward to yur next great piece. Love Janette
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