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With Glowing Soft Colors In Rainbow Hues

With Glowing Soft Colors In Rainbow Hues Romantic night of given heart, my sweet whatever shall dearest life truly be? Your softest touch and gentle heartbeat, mermaid swimming in my romantic sea. I hold only dreams of your beating heart with glowing soft colors in rainbow hues. Praying daily that we shall never part that my life never meets such dreaded blues. May we live lost within your finest dance while sleeping beside meadow flowers glow. Your love dwells in finest, purest romance, in a blessed gift joined, I pray to know. Your dance swept me completely off my feet. Forever my life joined with your heartbeat. 10-26-2015 Note- Sonnet on romance , one hundred words, perfect tens. Syllables Per Line: 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 10 10 0 10 10 Total # Syllables: 140 Total # Lines: 17 (Including empty lines) Words with (syllables) counted programmatically: Total # Words: 100

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Date: 11/2/2015 8:06:00 PM
Thanks all for the congrats. Have been quite sick lately. So not commenting very much.
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Date: 11/1/2015 11:27:00 PM
Congrats on ur superb win with this awesome write Robert!
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Date: 11/1/2015 5:10:00 PM
Such a beautiful tribute to your love, Robert, in your perfect Sonnet. Congratulations on your First Place win. Sandra
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Date: 11/1/2015 1:04:00 AM
Congrats on your soft colours of romance! Balveen
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Date: 10/31/2015 8:31:00 PM
Deserving first place Robert. Congratulations! On your win!!!
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Date: 10/26/2015 9:40:00 AM
Robert, I so like the mermaid line.. sweet and lovely, is this dedicated to your wife? wow!! lovely imagery and heartfelt purity!~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 10/26/2015 8:58:00 PM
Thanks Olive. Mermaids have always interested me since my days of youth and my reading everything on mythology that I could find.

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