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WITH FONDNESS

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WITH FONDNESS


My dear Beloved, Night owl hoots at me again beneath a ramp of clouds, like cozy pillow to my moon pinching this letter with anticipation to tuck my ruffled mind away… and in twilight’s dimming, a music box of rain songs frolics in slow, slow motion through whiffs of a lengthened day, discarding hours of your long absence with scented climb of new spring. Midway, a fading light and darkness, passages of tomorrow float as pages are to cotton leaves; lingering in some trickles of ticks while our orchids peep outside the sill… and between teapot and lamp’s glow the phone rings in a hush-a-bye, chiming low, your breath wafts a sigh to say how you love me in the dark… oh, can fate allow this distance to end? With deep fondness, nette ----- Love Letter Contest Of Heather Ober

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  1. Date: 5/25/2013 11:15:00 PM
    a very creative poem of yours friend Nette..I like it so much. Congratulations on your well-deserved win :) Been away for my grand vacation (27 days) so don't have the change to read some of your poems. Have a blessed Sunday. God bless you always :) Maria

  1. Date: 5/25/2013 4:55:00 PM
    Orchids outside the sill in Spring, trickles of ticks, pages like cotton leaves... Strangest juxtaposition of words I think I've ever seen. Congratulations!

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 6:47:00 PM
    Nette congratulations on your well deserve win. Nicely done. Warm Smiles, Connie

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 3:51:00 PM
    Full of mystery! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 1:34:00 PM
    Nette, congratulations on your winning poem... a great "Love Letter" entry. always ~Linda

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 11:12:00 AM
    Many congrats nette love xx

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 10:11:00 AM
    Nette, so many poems are like a thin broth you can drink from the bowl but yours require a spoon to eat more slowly and savor every bite--no exception here--a wonderful hearty feast of emotion and images.

  1. Date: 5/24/2013 9:32:00 AM
    Nette, you have created such a haunting atmosphere and sense of yearning. This is poetry at its finest! Congrats on your win in my contest :)

  1. Date: 5/4/2013 6:12:00 AM
    Mmmm, :D, how very lovely and moody, full of that end-of-day hovering of possibility and uncertainty, the dual nature of night. I love the word RAMP, fantastic! The only suggestion I have for the masterpiece is the last line of the first stanza, maybe plow instead of glow, so that glow in the second stanza gets that star attention? The last line held me there, suspended, as it should. Such a gift you have! Happy Weekend, dear! The weather here is finally matching the season. YEAH! xox

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 5:41:00 PM
    Dear Nette, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. Congratulations!! for this Spledid out pouring of the LOVE in YOUR Heart. I must apologize for the absents of my Quill's ink unto thine pages of YOUR POETRY. I have been lost to the darkness of grief. I shall read More of YOU now. I have read several of the "Love letter contest POEMS, YOU will stand in the Winner's Circle. I LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Loyal Liege...HG

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 5:15:00 PM
    Love will light up the night and your song will be heard for it is so beautiful thus irresistible! Good luck!

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 4:16:00 PM
    WINNER.....you friend are amazing

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 12:11:00 PM
    A great poem of fondness. Thanks...................., loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 8:38:00 AM
    Stunning & gripping flow from the heart. A simple intensity. Great job!

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 6:18:00 AM
    The romance and tenderness of this incredible write is outstanding my friend! Some of my favorite lines have to be, "beneath a ramp of clouds, like cozy pillow to my moon" and "chiming low, your breath wafts a sigh" You have delighted me with your lovely poem that you have so illustriously written with a passion unlike any other, Nette! Your letter is written awesome fondness, and with such emotion with each and every turn within this masterful piece! What a powerful poem, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 4:17:00 AM
    Wow!Another excellent romantic poem here Nette!It is a sure winner in the contest!

  1. Date: 5/3/2013 1:46:00 AM
    Thank you Nette for your always welcome comments on my endeavours.Rgds Brian