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With Final Burst

With final burst of golden rays sun sets below the horizon day fades away and here night stays From south gentle warm breeze plays luring beckoning the siren with final burst of golden rays Siren calls hearts are set ablaze and rising up comes Poseidon day fades away and here night stays Together they play in the bays ride waves on the crest of Zion with final burst of golden rays There is no more time for delays a merry nod to Orion day fades away and here night stays As departing we go our ways as daylight for us is poison With final burst of golden rays day fades away and night here stays

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/19/2014 3:20:00 PM
I like this form, you have brought it to life. Well done Shadow.
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Date: 1/19/2014 4:31:00 PM
ty Rick it is a lovely form Shadow x smile hug
Date: 1/19/2014 11:33:00 AM
Beautifully accomplished Shadow! It shines and you radiate! My best, chuck
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Date: 1/19/2014 4:30:00 PM
aw ty Chuck glad you enjoyed Shadow x smile hug
Date: 1/18/2014 2:50:00 PM
- A beautiful poem from your thoughts, Shadow. - As always enjoyable to read your poem! - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/19/2014 4:28:00 PM
ty Anne Lise hope yours was good Shadow x smile hug

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