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With Each Breath

Inhale.............. said the world. take it all in, untouchable realities that dash, dancing across my mental mind's eye. Fantasize.............. for a moment, so it begins, a mental inception, that has just been concieved, a dream unrealized, suddenly tangible, just because we BELIEVE. I........... I, if only, could only, hold this breath forever, who knows what dreams would become reality???? Desire.......... with a flame that burns forever, plus a day more, eternal. Realizing...... that the world sometimes cast upon us the cold, like unsettling weather, cold stares, cold shoulders, you know, piercing to the soul!!! Enough........ too make even the strongest hearts weak, spoiling this ride, of life and it's liberties. A....... timepiece's minute seem to force it all to subdue. Making........ me realize that if I stay the course, keep my head to the sky, all is possible, nothing's impossible! ((((((So with each stanza, letter at the start of each, section of this poem, take note and notice, the hidden message I try to relay))))))) IF I DREAM with each breath, praying to the creator, better reality, as I EXHALE!!!!!!!

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Date: 3/10/2010 5:09:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us today Jesu. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/9/2010 1:26:00 PM
Interesting write and presentation...I especially like the last stanza...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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