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With Blood Embraced

Like swirling winds across the land show no mercy to those you find As ravaging wolves with their gnawing teeth Mouths are gleaming, you will feast Veins to find, bleeding tears A vampire's pledge, inhale their death Meet the dead where spirits confide Dragons are slayed and worlds collide A realm of blood your final quest A fresh neck to trace Warmer blood to give you life A thirsty vampire Darker shadow, whispered ghost Take their soul with blood embraced 9/1/16 Challenge-Write one-Poetry-Contest

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Date: 9/9/2016 3:39:00 PM
A powerful 'vampire' poem, Frederic. Well done and congratulations on your fine placement. Sandra
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Date: 9/9/2016 12:04:00 PM
A dark, chilly and blood-thirsty write, Frederic. Just what the sponsor ordered:) Congratulations on this high placement. Regards // paul
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Date: 9/9/2016 11:15:00 AM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my contest with this chilling and wonderfully penned poem ~
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Date: 9/9/2016 7:43:00 AM
Frederic, love this because I LOVE anything with vampires and wolves, (supernatural etc..) this one is one of my faves in the contest so far..-congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Date: 9/1/2016 2:23:00 PM
- Impressive poem, Frederic - The first two lines are wonderful - Good luck in the contest - Happy weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/1/2016 11:22:00 AM
A little dark for you, Frederic. Vampires, ghastly! Am I missing a metaphor? Enjoyed the read. Read it over and over. Hopefully, it'll come to me later. My mind has slowed to a crawl. Lol
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