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With An Without You

when i was with you there were lies when i was with you there were tears when i was with you there was your insecurity when i was with you a razor was my best friend when i was with you there were abusive blows when i was with you there was hate and malice just wishing it would end without you there is darkness without you life is an infinte abyss without you there is no light to show me the way without each other we cant face another day and so we cant be with or without the other both of us souless monsters destroying more of each other never letting go both sealed to a never ending cycle till one or both of us pull the trigger

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Date: 9/14/2013 10:07:00 AM
Dana, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 9/12/2013 2:31:00 PM
Stinging beats of the heart. Writhing madness mixed w/occasional bits of clarity, before the vicious circle starts again. Incredible emotion & fight here. Great job!
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Date: 9/12/2013 1:26:00 PM
Hello Dana, wow... what an ending! love it ,, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/12/2013 1:26:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup,Dana ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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