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Wispy Fluff

Heavy grey clouds have finally passed. Spring is coming at last, at last. Blue sky full of wispy fluff Says to winter 'enough, enough'. Fluffy white clouds in sky of blue. This kind of day ... long overdue. Enough of winter, enough of cold. It's pristine beauty did quickly grow old. Spring, oh Spring, is on it's way As the fluffy clouds come out to play.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/10/2012 11:48:00 PM
A picture painted well.
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Date: 2/27/2012 8:14:00 PM
thankxxx Francine.. apprciate.. my husband is sliping up typing now.. he needs some serious lessons luv..
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Date: 2/26/2012 11:21:00 AM
enjoyed reading your creative write today Francdine.. thankxx for my winning poem Springtime Sonata in your Spring contest .. miss u ..hope all is well..luv..
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Date: 2/26/2012 8:09:00 AM
been a while, francine.. how are you?... this glowing verse floats like the sway of the season!.. thank you for the inspiration of your spring contest; i enjoy your themes..:) huggs!
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Date: 2/25/2012 4:32:00 PM
It reads like a "Nursery Rhyme" Francine. I can actually see children reciting this in class rooms. What a most lovely way to teach them the seasons, in rhyme. <*> Write more about the seasons, and take it from there <*> Have a lovely weekend :) xx
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Date: 2/19/2012 6:34:00 PM
at last at last I think it is on its way, Francine. GREAT poem for spring and hey, where have you been. I have not seen you recently. Hope you are ok!
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Date: 2/15/2012 10:35:00 AM
so rich in its simplicity, francine.. sweet congrats on your win!.:) huggs
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Date: 2/12/2012 11:09:00 AM
Hope the spring wil come soon Francine.... A beautiful poem you written. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/12/2012 2:30:00 AM
FRANCINE,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD
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Date: 2/10/2012 12:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my "FLUFF" contest Francine. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/10/2012 7:51:00 AM
congrats Francine on an excellent win for this amazing fluff luv..
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Date: 2/10/2012 2:14:00 AM
Francine congrats on your win, I agree it's freezing here in UK..David
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Date: 2/9/2012 8:01:00 PM
i like the rhyming and the construction. it sounded good as i read the words out loud and thats what counts. john
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Date: 2/9/2012 6:19:00 PM
Congrats, Francine. Awesome write. Enjoyed. Nice going. luv Ralph
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Date: 2/9/2012 4:41:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Francine, love Elizabeth
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Date: 2/8/2012 9:23:00 AM
Cute and heart felt by us all.
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Date: 2/6/2012 11:31:00 PM
Great poem, always nice to read your poetry Francine! Thank you for sharing! oxox hugs & love Laila
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Date: 2/4/2012 1:29:00 AM
I would, indeed, prefer that sort of fluff than the sort which has been falling. Nice write :-)
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Date: 2/2/2012 2:48:00 PM
Come on spring Francine its far too cold , enjoyed my visit , Declan xx
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Date: 2/2/2012 4:34:00 AM
lovely poem, good luck in the contest. Elizabeth
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Date: 2/1/2012 10:53:00 PM
Wonderful write, Francine! Thanks for your help today with my quintain. I'm very appreciative. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/1/2012 10:33:00 PM
We've had some unbelievably nice weather here on the East Coast for the last couple of days. Winter's only about half over. We've just been lucky. Good write here Francine.
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