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Over the hillsides, together we burn space and time....galloping with the wind... Clouds take me by the hand, and wind takes you by the mane Nothing outside our world can rival this contentment I can close my eyes, and trust that you will keep me safe O' beautiful creature that you are, your every movement breeds a fever Your every stride, takes me onto the precipice of happiness We are runaway dreamers, in the moment of some happy memory I hear the infinite past at the heels of your enchanted hoof Which ancestor first felt this same connection? At one with nature, at one with beast....O' beautiful creature that you are In the deep evening light of the early winter storm We are in a crystal white garden, just a trace of a moon between the clouds The chill of the snowflakes falling, as the wind is the force behind us while sight of your warm breath streaming is white in the moonlight's beam A trail left behind in our intimate world.... Such a moment is proof....like an ancient legend That we have passed this way Snow is still falling, but nothing can erase that we have been here We are the messengers...together we will be witness to the world That the hearts of species as wide as the universe Wind beneath our souls as one Can beat as one....drawn together, like poetic and timeless music I am part of you....and you are part of me And that both hearts can feel the same remorse when day is done -----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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Date: 5/14/2015 8:03:00 PM
Enjoying this poem again, Carrie sweet win...Linda
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Date: 5/14/2015 5:40:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats on the nice win. SKAT love
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Date: 5/12/2015 3:09:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work!!!Sara
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Date: 5/10/2015 5:27:00 PM
I think you are part of everything! Congratulations....
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Date: 5/10/2015 3:59:00 PM
Congrats on your win in the Jadazzle United contest. I am sorry Darren wasn't around to do the final judging with me - he was looking for romantic writes and this is very beautiful:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/5/2010 9:52:00 AM
Wow, Carrie, this is MAGNIFCENT. Congrats on your win in the contest. A fav for this beauty. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/2/2010 6:25:00 AM
Speachless - Really loved this one, loved everything about it, thanks. Congrats too!
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Date: 10/30/2010 10:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your sixth place win with this wonderful write, I truly enjoyed the read. Caryl
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Date: 10/28/2010 1:00:00 PM
wonderful entry , love it, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/27/2010 8:20:00 AM
What special memories our pets, or even work animals have given us through the years. And no wonder we become so attached to them. The memories "Queenie" have left, are testament to that. Many congratulation's Carrie on your win in Constance's fine contest >> James :)
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Date: 10/26/2010 3:26:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Constance's contest with this unique and creative entry .. most enjoyable read ..enjoy your grand win tonight luv..
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Date: 10/26/2010 3:02:00 PM
Beautifully written, Carrie. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/26/2010 1:05:00 PM
Great story Carrie. Congratulations on a worthy win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:37:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Carrie
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:13:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie on your win in Constance~The Rambling Poet's contest "Horses and Snowflakes". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/11/2010 10:58:00 AM
beautiful, Carrie good luck in the contest, have a nice one,..p.d.
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Date: 10/10/2010 7:20:00 PM
enjoyed!
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Date: 10/10/2010 6:11:00 PM
Very wonderful entry to the contest of Constance. sure to be a winner, Carrie
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