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Wishing Well Emotions

Wishing well of dreams You Illuminate colours Whom Impacted the heart and Soul Regardless of the outcome My little Orchid With your velvet frilled lips Touching soft petals Fresh kissing air your beautiful scent Rippling Inside a hair breath Warmly whispering with the ghosts Completely lost In Love Hurry because the cave man Will awaken from his cold winter sleep As the frozen tears of sadness drift across oceans Indian ocean of dreams regrets In colours of dripping tears Memories come to haunt heart and Soul Let come what may my mermaid beauty My Love maid of the moon weeping silver tears In beauty's moon before Taj Mahal In sorrow a mermaid tear stained face Long dark waterfall a shaking comb runs through My heart breaks at sight of tears In beauty's eyes My Indian Madonna weep not enough my tears be shed An Indian Orchid In heart of Soul's anguish A siren song forever sings sorrow's heart My sorrow runs forever to you a river wide Your mermaid heart feels the song of my storm laden Soul My heart now lost within a wishing well of dreams A Collaboration by Liam Mcdaid & Michael Clarke.

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Date: 12/3/2014 11:03:00 AM
This is a lovely piece and its a blessing to read it. Nice work.. Have a lovely week ahead
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Date: 12/1/2014 9:58:00 PM
Another outstanding poem Liam! Written by two of my very favorite poets! Liam and Mike. Great piece my dear friends! So beautiful! Enjoyed it! A 7 for you and a 7 for Mike! Have a very lovely day! God bless you both! love and hugs! :) xxxxx D
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Date: 12/1/2014 6:23:00 PM
Just lovely. Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 12/1/2014 2:37:00 PM
Very interesting co-lab! Light & Love
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/7/2014 3:58:00 PM
thank you kindly debbie beautiful comment
Date: 12/1/2014 12:48:00 PM
wow, enchanting are your sentiments, liam and mchael.. one more for the road!.. huggs
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/7/2014 3:57:00 PM
nette smiling the road is long ha ha loads of ink in the pen yet me and mike are just warming up thank you ever so kindly beautiful comment bless you
Date: 12/1/2014 12:35:00 PM
I can see your writings are getting better and better. Your warmly-whispering-with-the-ghosts line is what I like to read - turning something eerie into something sweet and endearing. Beautiful. Keep the ink a'flowing!
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/7/2014 3:51:00 PM
timothy thank you pal truly beautiful comment dear friend heartfelt appreciated bless you
Date: 12/1/2014 6:01:00 AM
Liam and Michael . . . A most extraordinary penned work here indeed!! So beautiful and full of compelling and enchanting imagery!! Really a top-notch write Gents!! Best Always, Gary
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/7/2014 3:49:00 PM
thank you gary pal for the wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated dear friend smiling
Date: 12/1/2014 5:42:00 AM
Ah...dear Liam...I feel the pain in this write. The wishing well may yet grant you your wish. You are such a kind and sweet soul....I don't see how there could be so much pain in your heart for surely, you are deserving of wonderful love....Such a beautiful piece of longing. :) Better things are in store for you, I'm sure.
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/7/2014 3:14:00 PM
sorry i am late wonderful comment eileen thank you ever so kindly dear friend bless you deeply appreciated

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