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Wishing Well

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Wishing Well

Sitting on a wishing well
Wish and wish I may
But my feet are getting soggy 
and I'm running low on change

I cant keep hanging onto dreams
Im drying out up here
My skins cracked and it falls slowly down
Waiting lightly on the water

Sitting on a wishing well 
Something shines below
Sometimes I think Ill dive in 
Sometimes I can still pretend


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