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wishing and seeking

You try and do what you can in life, living each day.
Not seeking all you really do.
That's where he comes in, opening your eyes to the truth.
You think your just a girl playing the game called life,
but to him, he sees a women standing strong.
Everyday you work hard to better yourself.
If you asked him, he thought you couldn't get any more perfect.
Standing in front of the mirror you add makeup trying to look prettier,
when he sees you he smiles knowing you never need it.
He sees beauty in everything you do,
is always there for you when life hits you hard,
and would never leave.
He does exist, and is out there,
if you are patient enough to find him...

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  1. Date: 3/29/2012 7:38:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Brittany. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol