Wishes

I wish to I could soar like a bird I wish that my important thoughts could be heard I wish to be loved by my friends and family I wish that beauty around is all anyone can see I wish my heart could be free and true I wish no one had to feel blue I wish everyone could have their hearts desire I wish everyone was as strong as a cable wire These are just some of the wishes I have for you Every wish I hope would come true

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/7/2016 1:15:00 PM

nICOLE r, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Stanley Carter

Date: 9/5/2016 12:57:00 PM

I liked it, but I believe there's a mistake in the first line. Shouldn't it be "I wish that I could soar..." rather than "I wish to I could soar..."?

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 9/5/2016 7:12:00 AM

This wonderfully written poem is overflowing with sheer honesty and was organized in a powerful way. I'm glad this was featured! In a sense we can say that at least a part wish 2 has been fulfilled because when shared, that's what a poem does! 7/7!

Skat A

Date: 8/31/2016 12:38:00 AM

Good list, Nicole Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Tim Smith

Date: 8/30/2016 4:18:00 PM

Lovely wishes nicole