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Wish Upon the Stars

There was once a young girl, Who wish upon the stars, Looking so bright in the sky, She dream and soar up high. Opportunities knock in front of her, She think, she decide, with a prayer, Go on, walk alone and prove to everyone, That no matter what, she will do her plan. Roads are not as smooth as she goes, But strong enough to dream and pursue, Thinking of the wish she promise to herself, And she asks God to give her more strength. To be strong to face challenges in life, And dedicate her wish to God above, Now success is within her reach, With her determination not to be rich, But to help for those who are need. A girl who once wish upon the stars, Is now a woman of example and virtues , For she is the already the molders of the youth, Wish granted and she is now contented, For God is really good if you believe and have faith 9th Place Winner Pd's "New Poem" Contest That Young girl was.......me 9th Place Winner For Nathan's "oOne of your Best" Contest

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Date: 7/7/2013 10:42:00 AM
:-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Nathan's contest!!! awesome winning write. LOVE LOVE * Linda
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:49:00 PM
Maria, , congratulations with your winning poem, in Nathan's contest. *SKAT*
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Date: 7/1/2013 9:24:00 PM
congrats ' NATE
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Date: 2/26/2013 1:04:00 PM
Maria, congrats on your win with this lovely poem! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/25/2013 3:21:00 AM
A very good poem to send to the contest and you won! - Congratulations! - Have a lovely new week! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/24/2013 9:38:00 PM
Hi Maria, , thank you for SUPPORTING MY NEWEST contest...CONGRATULATIONS on your awesome win ;-) LINDA
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Date: 8/6/2012 11:47:00 PM
thanks Joseph :) you are a good writer/poet, I read some of your poems and i like it..congrats!!
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Date: 8/6/2012 4:39:00 PM
lovely write Mary...enjoyed...luv...Joseph
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Date: 8/4/2012 12:18:00 PM
Another excellent poem my friend and this poems is about you. Good luck for the contest.
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/4/2012 5:49:00 PM
(^_^) thanks friend Nore...its about me ....God bless
Date: 8/4/2012 7:24:00 AM
Another golden gem from you Mary - very well written and I love it...thank you my friend - Have a nice weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Bukang Liwayway
Date: 8/4/2012 8:22:00 AM
thanks Anne...I inspired to write a poem because of reading poems from great poet/writer like you...you are one of my favorite poet :) God bless!!

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