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Wish List of the Soul

Health, wealth, success, grandeur, and happiness, Name, fame, status body-mind homeliness; Family, friends, love, and self-fulfillment, Thoughts, words, and actions purity movement... Within the heart of the ninth clouds floating, Through mysterious Milky-way boating; I want to have in each realm my own say, This has been my trance-mad daydreaming way... My soul leads me through divine love and joy, Betwixt fact and fancies I often coy; Elegant hills, vales, and landscapes I see, A drop of mighty seas I want to be... Pains seep in like water into cracked walls, The deep within depths toward fullness calls; Self and ego like snake and mongoose clash, Holiness, yet, like lava waves does splash... 16 December 2022 Our soul’s wish list Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Unseeking Seeker

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Date: 12/29/2022 3:59:00 AM
Awesome poem my dear friend Christuraj! I like it and I enjoyed reading it this evening. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations on your win! God bless you always and your writings. Have a blessed day! Hugs
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Date: 12/28/2022 2:13:00 PM
An intriguing poem--I especially like the last 2 stanzas--congrats, C.A.!!!
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Date: 12/28/2022 9:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.  I enjoyed your write. Have A Merry/Happy/Healthy/Blessed New Year 2023....................
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Date: 12/28/2022 5:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win, Alex. So lovely poem.
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Date: 12/27/2022 9:46:00 PM
"Self and ego like snake and mongoose clash, Holiness, yet, like lava waves does splash..." The concluding two lines are like icing on a cake. The clash between the warring selves is beautifully depicted through the image of snake and mongoose. Congratulations on your great win....dear friend.
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Date: 12/18/2022 9:32:00 AM
Love the message you've delivered. Many Blessings and Merry Christmas.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 12/27/2022 8:36:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 12/16/2022 4:06:00 PM
Great description! Good luck in the contest.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 12/16/2022 9:21:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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