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Wish I Knew You When I Was Young

I wish I had known you when I was young With poems to write and songs to be sung Walks In the moonlight holding hands Skinny dipping leaving clothes on the sands Family to build knowing right from wrong With memories brimming out keeping you strong Love your hint of a dimple when you smile Your willingness to go that extra mile The squeeze of your hand meaning all is ok I am not going anywhere, here to stay Why did we let the years pass by Why didn't we say. let's give love a try Penned November 23 2017

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Date: 12/3/2017 10:55:00 AM
Beautiful. Someone is very lucky. This would make an amazing song. I would send this to some of the great female singers. Maybe expand on it. Whatever this one is huge, I might even want to license it from you. A Huge Fav!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/3/2017 12:26:00 PM
Thank you Armand.....is there anyone...no. that's why it was a wish....Seren
Date: 11/26/2017 4:30:00 PM
This is so great! Your rhyme sings!... never too late they say :)...(or should I say neigh?) Have great day Seren :)
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Date: 11/23/2017 9:20:00 PM
I really enjoyed this, beautiful.
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Date: 11/23/2017 12:12:00 PM
Very touching poem, Seren. Beautifully nostalgic.
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Date: 11/23/2017 7:16:00 AM
Well I do hope that the two of you are together now. Better late than never now .w. Happy Thanksgiving my friend.
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Date: 11/23/2017 6:24:00 AM
Beautiful. Love comes into your life when your soul is ready. Embrace it 4EVA
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