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Wish I Had Known Him

They say I'm like my daddy I'm his kid through and through I have characteristics Of a man I never knew Long ago he left me Soon after my mom died Put up for adoption Couldn't count the tears I cried But now I hear the stories Of this man I'm like so much The way he used to phrase things His funny quirks and such He loved his ribald humor And loved to cook and sing Played guitar and often wrote We're alike in everything! My sister says I have his looks The Italian side of me Sometimes enjoyed a glass of wine Was nothing if not free He dated younger women Was quite the charmer too Had so many dear friends And had his moods of blue Well now the years have passed by And all these things I've heard But daddy is long gone now So I have to take their word

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/11/2014 10:29:00 PM
Deb,, Congratulations, a wonderful and heartfelt win. Love ~LINDA
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Date: 6/10/2014 7:51:00 PM
a most priceless gift. deb.. well composed deserving top place in the contest... congrats and huggs
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Date: 6/9/2014 10:58:00 PM
Nicely done. congrats on the win, deb
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Date: 6/9/2014 7:42:00 PM
this is sad and I am sorry that you have to rely on others for your memories. I am sue he tried to keep you. Love, Joyce
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Date: 9/19/2010 11:42:00 AM
Enjoyed stopping by to say hi while reading your poetry, have yourself a wonderful day full of love & joy. Keep them smiles coming*luv ~SKAT
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Date: 9/18/2010 9:06:00 AM
Love this thought provoking write, that so many will be able to relate too, must make sure my poem 'In his footsteps' is in my list, I think it might be one you'd enjoy! Thanks for your kindness of visit/comment, have a great weekend!
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Date: 9/18/2010 6:27:00 AM
beautiful tribute to one wished to be here now, a fav. for me and Fav. poet as well...Luv Michael
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Date: 9/18/2010 2:42:00 AM
What wonderful character drawing of the father, a very romantic person, Deb
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Date: 9/18/2010 2:18:00 AM
excellent and very profound, enjoyed this poem. Harry
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