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Wish you lose all teeth. One tooth let remain with you To feel that tooth pain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/11/2012 11:11:00 AM
Larisa, wow... now that is wishing for hope..LOL... love your haiku... thank you for the smile.. Or should I say the well deserved missing tooth image... pd
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Date: 11/11/2012 5:33:00 AM
Yep... no pain, no gain... Terry (Nice Haiku)
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Larisa Rzhepishevska
Date: 11/11/2012 7:19:00 AM
Thank you, dear Terry. Your comment means a lot for me. As far as you know English is a foreign language for me, but I love it so much and though I write poems in English I am still sometimes confused as I don't know if my grammar was correct. So, here is the question: for me or to me? With love and warmest wishes, Larisa
Date: 11/10/2012 11:44:00 AM
...lol... good one Larisa, well written. - Wishing you a lovely weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Larisa Rzhepishevska
Date: 11/10/2012 12:05:00 PM
Thank you dear Anne Lise. I also wish you a lovely weekend. With warmest wishes, Larisa

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