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Wisdom's Hide and Seek

There is simplicity inside the eye that opens oh so wide to pain Then closes to release the grain and rest the mind to hide again.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/15/2010 8:35:00 PM

VERY interesting one, Deb, and I see you got fifth?? GREAT job. LUv, Andrea

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/14/2010 8:11:00 AM

Congrats on the 5th place win

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/13/2010 5:15:00 PM

Congratulations, Deb. Well deserved win with these insightful eyes...and lots of wisdom. Love, Dane Ann

Rick Parise

Date: 7/13/2010 4:29:00 PM

CONGRATS~Very nice write, enjoyed. Thanks for the words of wisdom on my Haiku. Have a blessed day!!!!!!!~Rick

Scarlett Sepulvado Anderson

Date: 7/13/2010 3:55:00 PM

How beautifully written. Loved this very philosophical piece. Have a great day! Scarlett

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2010 10:39:00 AM

Congratulations Deb on your win in John Freeman's contest "Give Wisdom It's Beauty" (a couple of lines). Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/13/2010 7:28:00 AM

Congrats Debbie on your winning poem in the Wisdom contest with this powerful message in couplet form.. enjoy another biggie..TEACH.. with luv .pupil..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2010 6:47:00 AM

What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Deb. Love, Carol