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Wisdom's Gate

Knowing he knows not, the old man leaps, clicks his heels. His child touches ground.

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Justin Bordner

Date: 8/8/2014 8:13:00 PM

For me this is good life/death Art Craig. Every day invites a new leap. J.A.B.

Craig Glenister
Date: 8/12/2014 8:29:00 PM

Thank you Justin.amazing how circular life is

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/8/2014 1:30:00 PM

delighted by your element of surprise, craig... pen on!.. huggs

Craig Glenister
Date: 8/8/2014 7:35:00 PM

Thanks Nette..still learning haiku;learning you don't have to conform to the 575 rule..such a relief. The best haikus I have read have not. Yet to see the beauty in conformity..it's there..skirting round the edges of my mind..but I am yet to embrace it fully.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/7/2014 7:12:00 AM

- Very great haiku, Craig !!! - Like it! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Craig Glenister
Date: 8/7/2014 10:28:00 PM

Thank you very much Anne..means a lot to me xox..big hug