Wisdom

Worthy of making decisions and drafting conclusions Ideas manufactured from careful observation and scrutiny from a Sound mind soaked in constant learning and Dipped in the dense sea of understanding Only the unwise settle for just any result, because Matured thinking and calculative views give an excellent product

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Gerald Dillenbeck

Date: 2/3/2016 4:31:00 PM

Found it, finally. This is as good as I had hoped, given your IGNORANCE. Couple thoughts. Buckminster Fuller discusses the difference in depth between understanding as compared to deeper "comprehension". What about, "Worthy of building choices before drafting conclusions"? Under Ideas, I like regenerated more than manufactured because it feels more organic and life-giving. Love "Sound mind soaked in constant learning" although I might have gone for solid rather than constant, for alliteration.

M. L. Kiser

Date: 5/25/2015 8:08:00 AM

I do love the, "dip", in the "sea of understanding". Well said.

Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2016 9:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Kiser

Theresa Marie C.

Date: 5/16/2015 5:14:00 PM

WOW!! This says it all, this should be in the contest. I also agree with what Nino has said. This is indeed a 7. I so totally enjoyed.

Funom Makama
Date: 2/3/2016 9:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Theresa