Winter's Wake

Frigid timbers creak Bearing heaviest snow yet ... Warming sun awakes

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Len Gasun

Date: 4/17/2023 8:32:00 PM

Such a wonderful haiku my dear poet friend, Kelly. How I wish I can experience these beautiful seasons too someday. In the country where I live right now, we've only wet and dry seasons but dry season is longer and extreme. I enjoyed your poem my dear friend. Thanks a lot for sharing. Blessings to you always and to your golden pen. Hugs

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/18/2023 5:19:00 PM

Thank you so much, Len... I hope you do get the chance to experience the beauty of the winter season, but it can get very, very cold at times here in Wisconsin... Thankfully, we are finally beginning to get some much warmer weather now :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/8/2023 9:46:00 AM

Your write "Winter's Wake" is so true. I wish you would write more. Blessings................

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/14/2023 7:08:00 AM

Thank you once again, Paula, for taking the time to read and comment so kindly on my poems... I will do my best to write more of them :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/25/2023 11:55:00 AM

From what I see on TV, some areas out west and up north have had some really snowy, sleetly, cold weather and still are. I like the way you so aptly describe the scene. I hope you do get some warming and relief from what you and your area have experience. Thanks for sharing this one and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kelly Deschler
Date: 4/14/2023 7:06:00 AM

Thank you, Sara... We have been getting some much warmer weather now, very spring-like here :)