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Winter's Slumber Party

Sun rays are dancing on the frozen barley fields Splashing a golden hue on the ragged shed’s bricks Dried branches reaching out to the sun as in agony The sun is frail, smiles embarrassingly as it watches nature falling asleep Left behind wild geese tucked their heads under each other’s wings Singing each other lullaby of a splendid summer scene! Rahy Hy November 17, 2015 Written for the contest “Write me a winter poem!”

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Date: 11/20/2015 3:47:00 PM
Nicely done! Grats on your win
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Date: 11/23/2015 7:27:00 AM
Thank you Casarah for your encouraging word. Love, Rahy xoxo
Date: 11/20/2015 12:47:00 AM
Congrats on ur great win with this lovely write Rahy!
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Date: 11/23/2015 7:26:00 AM
Thank you Dr. Upma! Love, Rahy xoxo
Date: 11/19/2015 8:20:00 PM
Rahy, Congrats on your Winter Poem win. HUGS **SKAT**
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Date: 11/23/2015 7:26:00 AM
Thank you Skat! Love, Rahy xoxo
Date: 11/19/2015 1:57:00 PM
wonderful imagery I love your unique take on the winter theme congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/19/2015 2:18:00 PM
Oh Jan, I don't believe that I won! Thanks for letting me know. I am so honoured... It's amazing to be read and encouraged. Can't thank everyone, including yourself enough for all the support. Love, Rahy

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