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Winter's Sheen

Frozen ponds bear winters sheen Stark and bare, what once was green Morning frosts bring winter's bite, Now bitter days, and freezing nights. The winter sun, no comfort brings Too weak to thaw out winter's sting Amongst this there is beauty though, How lovely is new fallen snow. How beautiful are icicles Frozen cobwebs on a hedge, Frosty patterned window panes And snow upon the window ledge. Who is there does not delight In watching snowflakes fall at night, As silently across the land The snow queen opens up her hand. For a time, all will be still Captured each, by winter's chill. Winter, she shall have her day And for a while, she will hold sway.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 12/20/2016 8:06:00 AM
Beatifully done, Gary! Congratulations! ...Fran
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/20/2016 9:45:00 AM
Thank you Fran :)
Date: 12/19/2016 9:14:00 AM
Beautiful winter poetry, Gary...congrats on your win :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/20/2016 9:45:00 AM
Thank you Laura :)
Date: 12/17/2016 4:21:00 PM
Great winter poem! Congrats! :-)
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Gary Smith
Date: 12/17/2016 4:30:00 PM
Thank you Mark :)
Date: 12/17/2016 5:38:00 AM
Wonderful description of winter. I can see it right in front of my eyes. Congratulations :)
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Date: 12/17/2016 6:34:00 AM
Thank you Darren :)
Date: 12/16/2016 9:08:00 PM
Brilliant in snow white, Gary. Excellent choice you made for the contest with this beautifully descriptive poem. Congrats to you.
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Date: 12/17/2016 2:52:00 AM
Thank you Andrea :)
Date: 11/12/2016 3:13:00 AM
Like the poem Gary mate.To me its what Poetry should be like
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/12/2016 3:30:00 AM
Thank you John.
Date: 11/11/2016 3:38:00 PM
Really nice. I enjoyed reading this one. :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/11/2016 3:41:00 PM
Thank you Heidi.
Date: 11/11/2016 2:57:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful.
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Gary Smith
Date: 11/11/2016 3:14:00 PM
Thank you Christy.

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