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Winter's Rain

Few drops on the window glass, Cold cool breeze, Moving from the green freshly grass, And, all freezes! Fog hide the mountain's beauty, With the few drops of rain, And the mouth smokey. When will I feel that pain again? A hot cup of tea, Fell on my freezed knees, Whew! And my eyes sleepy. When will I enjoy this pain again ?

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Date: 12/24/2020 12:18:00 PM
You've built the image of winter quite adequately. The last line I thought was true irony.
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Meetkumar Tailor
Date: 1/6/2021 5:08:00 AM
Thank you so much

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