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Winter's Pack

ivory feathers splayed upon the bones of fall- autumn requiem spring's phoenix, birthed of frost flairs it’s ice shorn wings

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 12/25/2015 1:44:00 PM
Very creative work..Congrats on this winner ..May this be the best Christmas up to this point in your life and may the ones that follow only become better..Thanks for the visit to my page.Sara
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Date: 12/20/2015 4:14:00 PM
A delightful poem where imagery plays a main part. ~ Congratulations on a merited win, David. ~ May I take this opportunity to wish you all the best for Christmas and the New Year. Blessings. // paul
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Date: 12/20/2015 11:24:00 AM
This is beautiful, David; gorgeous imagery. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/20/2015 11:02:00 AM
Congrats on your win. SKAT
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Date: 12/20/2015 6:06:00 AM
how graceful is this, david..warm congrats and thanks for being part of my contest..huggs"
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Date: 12/19/2015 7:39:00 PM
wow, this is gorgeous!!! just gorgeous.
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Date: 12/19/2015 6:20:00 PM
You are such an amazing poet... SKAT
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David Mohn
Date: 12/20/2015 8:09:00 PM
thanks so much for the lovely comment SKAT...you are as well and will be greatly missed...I've enjoyed your many wonderful contests

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