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Winter's Last Gasp

It began with rain, pelting yellow daffodils to the ground. Sleet rode rain's coattails, staccato dings on our windshield. In the empty parking lot, black-lettered buses stood empty; no church today. Through potato-soup lunch, we watched quarter-size snowflakes cover sleet. Over hours of a long, gray day, snow mounded, transformed familiar objects into phantoms. Suet cake brought birds, squabbling for food, through the rising mantle. One kicked snow behind on the deck floor, its tiny feet scratching like a chicken. Wild Wind swept in, shoved snow off tree limbs, cleared rooftops, created a sweeping screen of white in the snowy air. World without color, a total whiteout of raw beauty, surpassed only by concern for the birds.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 7/27/2021 10:53:00 AM
Cool poem Cona! I can picture these scenes well!
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Date: 2/24/2015 7:29:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem and its great images.
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Cona Adams
Date: 2/25/2015 5:30:00 AM
Thank you, Carol. So glad to connect with new friends on poetry soup. Blessings!
Date: 1/23/2015 4:39:00 PM
What a vivid poem. Great story telling. I can hear her gasp in the wind.
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Cona Adams
Date: 1/23/2015 7:02:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ed, for the visit to read, and for your generous comment. Have a great weekend!
Date: 1/20/2015 5:09:00 PM
This poem is the real thing. I guess you either have it, or you don't. You have it.
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Cona Adams
Date: 1/21/2015 11:44:00 AM
Thank you, Bill. I seldom receive such praise, especially for free verse. You've made my day.
Date: 1/20/2015 1:25:00 PM
I love your style of writing Cona. Your poem embraces the beauty of winter with breathtaking imagery! Looking through a very impressive winter window. Bravo!#7
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Cona Adams
Date: 1/21/2015 11:43:00 AM
Thank you much, Connie, for the visit, and for your generous comments. I've always loved snow.

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