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Winter's Lair

Evening skies darken to ashen gray Mesmerizing, no glance dare go astray Small living creatures sense looming danger Low black clouds, mother nature's anger Trees scatter moonlight's eerie shadows Warm breath turns crisp in this sudden winter castle Stardust lands on frozen meadows As creeping fog erases moon's shadows Icicles hang like stinging tassels From petals on yesterday's beautiful flowers Footsteps today placed upon soft green grass Now shatter beneath me like breaking glass Bare exposed arms of the mighty oak tree Even her fingers, tremble of what is to be Now encased completely in coffins of ice Awaiting mother nature's one destructive sigh To bring down her branches Out goes the power End of story ©Donna Jones

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/1/2013 12:09:00 PM
Lovely metaphor here...good write! -Dean
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Donna Jones
Date: 3/1/2013 3:12:00 PM
Appreciate that Dean..:-)
Date: 2/27/2013 5:16:00 PM
yes, winter can be just like a lair and your imagery captures that idea, sweetie. I enjoyed finding this one to read.
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/27/2013 7:48:00 PM
I've been through many such Oklahoma ice storms...thanks for stopping by Andrea...have a nice night
Date: 2/25/2013 11:42:00 AM
I hope that this has not happened to you lately..That is not a good part of winter...Enjoyed reading your work..It has good flow to it...Sara
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/26/2013 12:41:00 PM
Just snow...but OK has had its share of these nasty ice storms...so destructive...thanks for reading today Sara..blessings
Date: 2/25/2013 7:21:00 AM
ooo...I really like this one!...its right up my alley
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/25/2013 10:17:00 AM
Thanks Caleb glad you enjoyed...and thanks for stopping by..Donna
Date: 2/24/2013 7:35:00 AM
I'm sure you must have lived in Canada to be able to write about winter with such deep passion. I've had 77 of them... far too many! Another excellent offering! Big hugs, Jack xox
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/24/2013 4:50:00 PM
Nope...but lived in some pretty cold country....don't know if you'll read this or not but I am not able to reply to your poems. Thanks for stopping by..donna
Date: 2/23/2013 12:32:00 PM
Beautiful rhythm and an exceptional visual poem. Nicely donee Donna. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/23/2013 7:01:00 PM
:-) thanks so much Connie...
Date: 2/23/2013 11:46:00 AM
This is one dynamic and enlightening write my friend! I loved reading this stupendous piece this afternoon! What a harrowing experience this adventure surely is! Quite the spectacular poem, Great Work!!
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/23/2013 7:00:00 PM
Thanks Russell much appreciated..
Date: 2/23/2013 11:28:00 AM
- Mother Nature is the most beautiful picture, no matter the season Donna. - Thanks for your lovely poem. -Wishing you a wonderful weekend. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Donna Jones
Date: 2/23/2013 11:40:00 AM
Thanks...you also...these weekends surely come and go quickly don't they?

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