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Winter's Grip

In winter, when the temps go down The trees are all undressed. It seems a bit ironic, Although Nature knows what’s best. For if the branches kept their coats Of leaves to keep them warm, Perhaps they’d weigh things down When battered by a winter storm. We bundle up when it is cold And we’re in winter’s grip, But all the trees (except the firs) Think it’s the time to strip.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/19/2016 11:41:00 AM
So clever ilene. I think I've read another poem that was similar to this. I almost think it might have been one of yours. ?;/
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Date: 1/18/2016 9:26:00 PM
Interesting poem that gives the trees a humorous paradox.
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Date: 1/17/2016 4:11:00 PM
Very enjoyable Ilene. A fun piece.
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Date: 1/17/2016 1:28:00 PM
Written in your own inimitable style with superb cadence and rhyming. BRAVO Ilene! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/17/2016 1:23:00 PM
lovely personification Ilene:-) I love all the seasons but do love it when Spring arrives and the world is a little more colourful:-) hugs Jan xx
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