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Winter's Film Star

You're the reason I rise on a winters day . You put that glint in my eye and a smile on my face. Your my Hollywood hero a star of matinee. You're the girl of my dreams my ideal castaway. Those smiles that you give me, your just ace. You're the reason I rise on a winters day. You're the moon and the stars reflected on a wind swept bay. In a race for my heart you would always get first place. Your my Hollywood hero a star of matinee. I would walk on hot coals from here to Bombay. To be by your side, and see that smile, face to face. You're the reason I rise on a winters day. People may frown but you'll be mine one day. Your my favourite member of the human race. Your my Hollywood hero a star of matinee. I would whisk you off your feet and take you away . And every day your beauty I would showcase. You're the reason I rise on a winters day . Your my Hollywood hero a star of matinee.

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Date: 11/29/2016 2:20:00 PM
a star of a poem, stephen.. greeat job!..huggs
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 11/29/2016 3:31:00 PM
cheers nette wanted to try something different and remember doing a comp using this form
Date: 11/29/2016 2:04:00 PM
Excellent villanelle, a joy to read.
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Stephen Pennell
Date: 11/29/2016 2:19:00 PM
many thanks only tried the form a couple of times for comp's on here so very nice of you to say so. stephen

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