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Tonight,.. stars dangle from the trees, honed razor sharp, to pierce the cold Yet, fragile is the whispered breeze, for winter's grasp is growing old Forever words, were once conceived, still tangible, on sprouted leaves But dreams that disappeared again will wither and must have an end A newer song, within the breeze, has drifted with each snowflake, fair, And sift through branches, as a dare to urge the sprouts that burrow there When world was bathed in ivory snows Forever' words that we had known will melt away, as they must be What matters now, are memories, as winter comes, as winter goes Within the clutch of winter's night the grip was strong, and fastened tight, But moon and stars, unite as friends and earth will know the sun again Tonight, stars dangle from the trees reminders of the season's end of what is found, and will begin One season ends, and one begins ___________________________________________________________ 1/13/15 For Skat's Contest: "Winter's End"

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Date: 5/6/2015 7:27:00 AM
Many verses with with creative thought: "A newer song, within the breeze, has drifted with each snowflake...as a dare...", "But moon and stars, unite as friends...". Nicely done, congrats!
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Date: 5/5/2015 7:24:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Carrie. Love the flow of your words as well as the hope of renewal in your last stanza. Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/5/2015 3:02:00 PM
Carrie, Congratulations in "Winters End contest." Have a nice day. LINDA
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Date: 5/5/2015 10:58:00 AM
Carrie. Congratulations <3 thank you 4 supporting my "Winters End" contest. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 1/19/2015 3:48:00 PM
wonderful imagery Carrie great write gl in contest hugs
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Date: 1/14/2015 2:29:00 PM
wow, I hope I have time to try this one. My time just isn't what it used to be. and I would love to write one this beautiful for her contest. Awesome.
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Date: 1/14/2015 8:20:00 AM
Magical, Carrie, I was lost in the beautiful imagery...hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 1/13/2015 6:56:00 PM
Simply stunning Carrie - wonderful imagery and image:-) good luck in the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
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