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Winter's Deep Woods

A pine branch dangles over a heap of leaves that had fallen in Fall; every morning, sunlight rays reach down to kiss the cold snow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/21/2012 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's "Forest Lights" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/20/2012 3:50:00 PM
i like the kiss and the dangling pine branch. very descriptive! congrats on your win!
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Date: 5/19/2012 10:48:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrew! I love your poem and how you described the scene. Beautiful! Blessings and Love, Rhonda
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Date: 5/19/2012 9:16:00 PM
Like this Tanka, Andrew, the last line is quite unique. Congrats on a worthy win, Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/19/2012 6:29:00 PM
Congratulations David on your beautiful tanka and win. Joyce
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Date: 5/19/2012 12:33:00 PM
Andrew congrats on your win..David
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Date: 5/19/2012 10:39:00 AM
Andrew, I just love the thoght of sun rays kissing the cold snow. Beautiful imagery throughout your poem. Alexa and I congratulate you on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/14/2012 3:40:00 PM
Like this Tanka, Andrew, especially the last line. harry
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