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Winter Years

Winter Years Oh gone is the fall, in its wake comes the sorrow, the gray icy sting of dark winter to follow. Oh gone is the fall, no more time left to borrow, as winter portends the sad end to tomorrow. Sandra M. Haight ~9th Place~ Contest: Four Lines ~ Deep and Dark Poetry Sponsor: Broken Wings Judged: 09/23/2015
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Date: 9/28/2015 9:49:00 PM
Sandra,, Congratulations on your Four Line win. Forever **SKAT**
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Date: 9/26/2015 5:57:00 PM
beautifully penned Sandra congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/24/2015 11:51:00 PM
Wonderful expressions Sandra! Congrats on big win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/25/2015 9:31:00 AM
Thank you, Dr. Upma. Your visits and comments are so welcomed. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/24/2015 3:37:00 PM
I really really liked yours. It was one of my favorites. I think yours and mine were not quite dark enough!! Anyway, Congratulations to you.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/25/2015 9:32:00 AM
Hi Andrea, thanks for your supportive comment. I appreciate your visit and congrats. Sandra
Date: 9/24/2015 7:54:00 AM
Very nice rhythm to your write, as dark as it is beautiful, nicely done :)
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/25/2015 9:33:00 AM
So pleased you like it, Casarah, and thank you for your positive comment. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 9/23/2015 9:16:00 PM
Sandra, I just stopped by to say congratulations on your win:-)Alexis
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/25/2015 9:31:00 AM
Thank you so much, Alexis. I appreciate it. Sandra
Date: 9/23/2015 6:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Sandra. Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/23/2015 12:30:00 PM
Lovely write, Sandra. So sad, poor Winter always the bad guy.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/23/2015 2:12:00 PM
Hi James, thank you for your comment. Actually, here I was referring to the "winter of our life" meaning senior years...looking at death (hence fulfilling the contest theme: deep and dark). Perhaps I wasn't too clear...it did not place high in the contest. But I do appreciate your visit! Sandra
Date: 9/22/2015 10:29:00 PM
Excellent four lines, dear!
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