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Winter Storm Within

Silent cold piercing light reflecting off waves of madness powerful unsean forces pull and twist icey tears from God's angry heart beat against the tender soul within

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/12/2010 9:36:00 AM
VERY NICE WRITE AND WELCOME TO POETRY SOUP LOOK FORWARD TO READING MORE FROM YOU FALESHIA
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Date: 3/12/2010 9:31:00 AM
Hey welcome to poetry soup!
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Date: 3/12/2010 9:28:00 AM
Wow. This is really good. Love the imagery. Love it!
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Date: 3/12/2010 9:19:00 AM
Its really cool i like it alot, get in the chat room
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Date: 3/12/2010 8:51:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Holly. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/12/2010 7:31:00 AM
A wonderful poem to read this morning. Enjoyed...
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Date: 3/12/2010 7:19:00 AM
This is a very powerful description of the affects of depression, Holly. Indeed, it deserves comparisson to a "Winter Storm Within." Well done! Love, Carolyn
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