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Winter Solstice

Winters frosty snowflakes fall Ice runs through your desire Never ending nippy nights Tender moments by the fire Evergreens flapping in the winds Rivers frozen, slightly dire Silent days and Shimmering nights Overcast evenings so inviting Loves flame slowly lighting Sparkling, shivering so exciting Tinsel dancing in the air Icicles shining with such flair Cold breezes blowing through Every nook and part of you.

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Jan Allison

Date: 1/18/2015 2:08:00 PM

wonderful imagery in your winter solstice poem - many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Carmen Penchi Aka Sunshine
Date: 1/20/2015 4:23:00 PM

thank you ! if it wasn't for the commentary, i would never know i was listed as winning anything LOL

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/17/2015 9:07:00 PM

Well worded write on winter, congrats on the win,

Carmen Penchi Aka Sunshine
Date: 1/20/2015 4:23:00 PM

thank you !

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/17/2015 7:25:00 PM

Carmen, Congratulations, on your awesome Winter Win:) I super love and enjoyed all poems, some more than others. Anyways, this was XOOL and had Winter written all over. Stop by my latest blog "Winter Rose" if you'd like. Have fun, reading any poem on my list. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Carmen Penchi Aka Sunshine
Date: 1/20/2015 4:24:00 PM

thank you !