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Winter Slumber

Cozy patchwork skies, Blanket the frozen forest: Hibernating trees.

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Laura Mckenzie

Date: 8/13/2013 1:25:00 PM

Very nice it paints a grand winter pic! Laura :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/17/2013 10:27:00 AM

Hmm... I believe I'd like to see those patchwork skies! On my first plain trip I could see the patchwork fields seen FROM the sky. But not the other way around... there's a peacefulness about this haiku. The hibernating trees is probably what does it... good work!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/6/2013 12:18:00 AM

Those patchwork skies..how beautiful..Lovely images penned.Im seeing Carrie s blog below and i too wonder about Ab and his family.I wish all soupers could be.back for good

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/1/2013 9:14:00 AM

Our trees have just come out of hibernation........achooo !! :) Hope you had a wonderful Easter, Raul !! I love seeing your beautiful haikus grace the pages of PS !! (I often think of Abe.....give him a hello for me if you can........the two of you were some of my first and most thoughtful friends of the early soup days. :)