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Winter Sledding

Winter slopes abound, Flakes of white, are all around More are coming down Let's find a hill, We'll sled down it,for a thrill Trek back to the top This is a Haiku/ Senryu combo...Want to go sledding !

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Date: 12/8/2009 1:45:00 PM

Reminds me of my childhood. You have me smiling with this scene. So you are Jared's dad. Welcome to our poetry family! This is definitely worth more than one read. Keep on writing! Karen

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 12/5/2009 4:38:00 PM

we have a big hill and we just go down on a heavy duty wagon, since we don't get much snow.

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/5/2009 7:27:00 AM

Next week babe~ Then there will be enough snow....great job! love ya~mary

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/4/2009 2:58:00 PM

This poem makes me wanna go sledding,Make snowmen,play snow fight and more..lovely indeed--Charma

Marty Owens

Date: 12/3/2009 7:52:00 PM

Very nice...I'd love to go sledding...enjoyed reading...Marty

James Marshall Goff

Date: 12/3/2009 4:52:00 PM

I have my childhood sleds in my writing-room right now! Richard! comforting memories! nice poem! jimbo

Raul Moreno

Date: 12/3/2009 2:13:00 PM

Sounds like fun, I haven't sledded either in some time...Raul

Mary Meade Stephenson

Date: 12/3/2009 1:55:00 PM

Superb haiku/senryu combo....fantastic imagery captured in so few words...Great Job Babe!! M

Date: 12/3/2009 1:25:00 PM

Oh, this reminds me of childhood and brought a smile to my face. Thank you for sharing this day brightener. Keep on writing! Karen

Jared Pickett

Date: 12/3/2009 12:53:00 PM

I see you.... I haven't sledded in many years, busy.... Good job pops.....:JP]

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/3/2009 12:37:00 PM

Going down sounds like fun. The going up sounds like work. I would need a combination ski lift and downhill slope. Great winter write. Keep the magical and fun pen flowing. Sara