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Winter Sea Tanka For Me Contest

My father is dead I kneel by gray winter seas Fjords echo my rage Grief swoops down from the heavens Like hawks grabbing prey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/23/2012 4:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine win once again Victoria xx
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Date: 10/22/2012 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D."s "Tanka~sad song" Victoria. Love, Carol XXXX
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Date: 10/22/2012 9:20:00 AM
congrats on your win Victoria....very touching!!!
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Date: 10/22/2012 7:25:00 AM
Congrats on your win! a powerful piece!
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Date: 10/21/2012 11:53:00 AM
Victoria, congratulations with your to be or not to be tanka poem in my contest... take care of yourself' always~PD
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Date: 10/7/2012 9:01:00 AM
Victoria, what a wonderful Tanka you have penned. I enjoyed the read, best to you in the contest~ Caryl
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