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Winter Scene

Winter Scene A white domain, rhythmic tinkling of bells the pure mystery of diagonals and gliding along snow-lanes Mystical plumes from flared nostrils, snow crunching under animated hooves. A sled streaming through stillness, stone-carved beauty alive in shape and form A temporary world that feels timeless. Old or New 8 line MAX - Contest Judged: 10/8/2016 8:11:00 PM Sponsored by: Rick Parise First Place

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Line Gauthier

Date: 5/22/2021 6:50:00 AM

Winter can be beautiful indeed. Well penned, Suzanne.

Susan Lawrence

Date: 12/15/2020 7:55:00 PM

Suzanne, Dreamy and mysterious and tantalizing in its detail. I sense and want to be in that temporary world! Congratulations. Susan

John Lawless

Date: 10/10/2016 5:51:00 PM

Suzanne, this one gave me a "shiver" as the winds chill the evening and the leaves abandon the trees. You "painted" a lovely picture

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/9/2016 3:42:00 PM

Wonderful winter imagery, Suzanne. Congratulations on your First Place Trophy win! Hugs, Sandra

Lu Loo

Date: 10/8/2016 9:43:00 PM

Suzanne- such a lovely poem..congratulations on your placement! :)-luloo

Janis Thompson

Date: 10/8/2016 9:18:00 PM

Many wonderful winter images in this poem. Congrats on your trophy win.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 2/8/2016 8:23:00 PM

Such a wonderful mood to this poem. I can really see that horse just gliding in on the snow as if it were a cloud. I especially love those winter nights, where even the sky is solid white. I also enjoy how the focus is on the sled and horse, rather than the human. Makes it more mysterious.