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Winter Pledge

A beautiful white blanket covers the vast expanse... Flakes mingle with the wind and they begin to dance. The sun plays hide and seek, behind the wintry sky. Autumn bows out, signaling a taunting goodbye... The night beckons, as the day draws to a close... Pledging a secret promise, of a wintry tomorrow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/1/2010 10:07:00 PM
am amazing rhyme written within that flows very well along with pictures I vision from your words,,Sorry it has taken so long to return but Thank you for your words left behind after reading mine,,,Blessings..cecil
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Date: 12/30/2009 10:51:00 AM
Nice one, Erin!
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Date: 12/29/2009 12:07:00 PM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Erin. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/29/2009 4:14:00 AM
Nicely done couplet. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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