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barefoot grass of dawn outlining winter-brushed climb as new sprouts open, I search morn in veiled ascent ...to find sheen from godly light ---------------- 8..03..2016 One Tanka Nature Poem Inspired By My Poem Rick Parise Contest

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Bl Devnath

Date: 8/17/2016 1:25:00 PM

Congrats on your win my friend. Beautiful natural scene. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Probir Gupta

Date: 8/8/2016 6:03:00 AM

Lovely Tanka ... Congratulations on your win ...

Paul Callus

Date: 8/6/2016 8:12:00 AM

I had no doubt that this was a sure top winner, Nette! Congratulations!! Hugs // paul

Joseph May

Date: 8/5/2016 3:01:00 PM

Beautiful tanka Nette...best wishes

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/5/2016 7:17:00 AM

Beautifully done Nette, congratulations...

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/5/2016 12:33:00 AM

Lovely tanka with an excellent imagery:) Congratulations on your win, Nette:)

Sandra Haight

Date: 8/4/2016 10:34:00 PM

Lovely imagery, Nette. Congratulations on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/4/2016 9:34:00 PM

Hi Nette, This is lovely. Congratulations on your 3rd place win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis

Tim Smith

Date: 8/4/2016 5:57:00 PM

Great to see this one on the list nette...one of my favorites.

Laura Leiser

Date: 8/4/2016 5:40:00 PM

Very lovely tanka, Nette! Congrats on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2016 5:25:00 PM

congrats on this beautiful gem, Nette.

Lu Loo

Date: 8/4/2016 4:38:00 PM

wonderful tanka lady, congrats on your placement! :)-luloo

Paul Callus

Date: 8/3/2016 3:35:00 PM

The charm and magic of dawn, introduced by lovely imagery, followed by two great ending lines. Full marks to you, Nette! Hugs // paul

Frederic Parker

Date: 8/3/2016 2:49:00 PM

my first thought after reading was light reflecting from soft morning dew as a new day beckons..a picture painted in my mind..

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/3/2016 5:55:00 AM

How inspiring and refreshing dear, nette! A seven!

Caycay Jennings

Date: 8/2/2016 9:12:00 PM

A beautifully done response to his write, fresh and sheen-filled! CayCay

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 8/2/2016 4:09:00 PM

You are always so good in both tanka and haiku..Fantastic Nette...Loved it.

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/2/2016 3:04:00 PM

You sold me on the first line, nette. I do not know about tankas but I love fresh dew covered grass, the feel and the smell.

Carly Lalion

Date: 8/2/2016 2:00:00 PM

Magnificent poem! Indeed, a soft voice --- from searching and finding the marvel of dawn's break--- that ends with the Source who creates this miracle every day!

Leon Datu

Date: 8/2/2016 1:27:00 PM

You have painted magic and I felt visions of the divine through the glimpse of your morning." Finding tints from lightened gods" pins this brilliant tanka!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/2/2016 1:11:00 PM

A terrific Tanka nette...Im sure this one will be singing on top

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/2/2016 12:36:00 PM

- Lovely poem, Nette - Best of luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)