Winter Morning's Sun

winter morning's sun shines upon the naked oak.. shadow stretches far

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Harry Horsman

Date: 1/22/2013 1:45:00 PM

this is clever Sara,, love this Haiku..

Russell Sivey

Date: 1/21/2013 4:16:00 PM

Wow, this is one of your all time best writes my friend! I really really enjoyed reading this incredibly wondrous poem this evening! What a powerful message that you conveyed here within this piece, that eventually there will be change and Spring will finally come! What an outstanding poem, Great Work!!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 1/21/2013 11:48:00 AM

Ow what a beautiful image you ve created

Jack Ellison

Date: 1/21/2013 11:26:00 AM

The sun is low on the horizon soon to climb high above where it belongs! Spring cometh... hugs, Jack xox