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SNOWPLAY Most love Christmas cozy, warm At home with family, socks and tree Embrace each other, cuddling arms Together enjoying, carefree For me it's cold and snow and you Snowflakes on my hair, in eyes Laugh and chase you 'til I do Trip and fall. Before I rise You jump, you pin me and you kiss The stars, the grey day far away I only see you, I don't miss The warmth indoors, happily stay With glee outside on Christmas day For hours and hours, sweet winter's play. *** December 26, 2016 N/A in contest: Winter Magic Sponsor: Mystic Rose

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/23/2017 2:53:00 PM

Dropping by to wish you Merry Christmas. I enjoyed reading this romantic piece Darren. Thanks for all your thoughtful visits and comments throughout the year.

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/10/2017 8:29:00 AM

Straight from a wintry scene I once played in the snow with a lady I was deeply in love with. A top class and inspiring sonnet my friend.. A fav..

Darren White
Date: 9/10/2017 12:16:00 PM

Thank you so much, my dear friend

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/2/2017 5:45:00 AM

Oh, I think I will see this beauty on the short winner's list Darren. Superbly done! : ) 7

Darren White
Date: 1/2/2017 6:06:00 AM

We'll see what happens... thank you, Connie :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/27/2016 11:58:00 AM

- Romance in the snow ... warm small kiss .... no one will freeze :) - A lovely poem, Darren - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White
Date: 12/29/2016 12:10:00 PM

Thanks so much Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 12/27/2016 8:22:00 AM

It is fun to frolic in the pureness of winter with the one you love... Delightful Darren

Darren White
Date: 12/29/2016 12:09:00 PM

Yes, I agree :) it was so much fun to write it too!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 12/27/2016 3:08:00 AM

Beautiful poetry! Snow play, one of the joys of youth. Nice imagery.

Darren White
Date: 12/27/2016 3:12:00 AM

Thank you, I loved writing it. I missed snow here with Christmas though, lot of rain and wind here :)

Jean Murray

Date: 12/26/2016 12:03:00 PM

Sweet indeed your winter magic.

Darren White
Date: 12/26/2016 12:10:00 PM

Thank you, Jean :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/26/2016 7:13:00 AM

You painted words of a Winter scene so beautifully Darren.

Darren White
Date: 12/26/2016 7:21:00 AM

Thank you, Charmaine :)

Chris Green

Date: 12/26/2016 6:49:00 AM

There is a certain magic that comes this time of year and you have described it well. Love is always magical.

Darren White
Date: 12/26/2016 7:02:00 AM

Welcome back, Chris :) and thank you!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/26/2016 3:52:00 AM

may be a 'winter poem' but this is hot hot hot Darren - what a cute romantic sonnet:-) Hope you had a great day yesterday - such sad news about George Michael - what a talented guy:-( hugs jan xx

Darren White
Date: 12/26/2016 4:01:00 AM

Yeah Jan :( ... 2016 doesn't stop taking and taking... It's horrible. BUT I am having a great Christmas, for the first time in my life :)

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon

Date: 12/26/2016 3:04:00 AM

Well written by Darren. A big 7 soup rating!

Darren White
Date: 12/26/2016 3:18:00 AM

Thank you, honoured with the 7, Adeniji!