Winter Magic

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Winter Magic - 8-12 Lines of Rhyme Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin 01/13/2024

Shrunken by the cold weather, winter magic gathers us together. Shivering as naked trees, we travel across the seas. We join our effort to see magic under our knees. We pray to reach home, our heart is not alone. A magic winter delights us on its own. A magic winter provide us with fulness, despite of its dulness. Under the grey skies we feel small. Quietly at night, the waves heat fast our boat. Trying to sleep, we wait for the marmaid calls. The magic of another winter, embraces us with our recalls.

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Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/15/2024 6:12:00 AM

Maria, beautiful winter scenes on the sea, congratulations on your winning placement!

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/15/2024 6:46:00 AM

Ahh! Thank you so much Tania. Have a lovely day!

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/13/2024 4:26:00 PM

a lovely and gentle write, Maria. Reading it made me feel cozy. I especially liked 'a magic winter provides us with fulness, despite its dullness.' Therein lies the magic. If for a contest, this is a fabulous entry. Stay warm in your part of the world, hugs, Sara

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/14/2024 2:30:00 AM

Good morning Sara. Thank you for your kind comment. Yes, we try to stay warm, especially today Sunday, I decided to have a big portion of sofa and tv. as the rainy and cold day. Stay warm you both too. There is a polar wind everywhere. Enjoy your Sunday as much as you can my couple of Texan friendsxxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/13/2024 12:48:00 PM

- Both people and trees are shivering in the cold winter ... great written, Maria :) - hugs

Maria Fernandez-Garcia
Date: 1/13/2024 12:59:00 PM

I hope the magic winter up there embrace you with a magic touch, at least with health my dear Anne. I love snow, difficoult to see here nowadays, but at the same time our body it's not accustomed to it. Anyway, thank you so much my friend. Hugsxxx