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Jan. 10, 2024 3.18pm

As a chilly freezing breeze wraps us all around, Snow-carpets stretch far, covering the ground. Trees veil…wearing gowns pristine and white, Sparkling brightly in the cold moonlit night. Hanging icicles on gutters, vegetation and waterfalls Are winter fairies’ crystal wands and chimes in silent call. When a bull elk dashes through the thick snow, Snowflakes shower like fountain for a magical show.

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Carl Jun

Date: 4/16/2024 12:06:00 AM

Very Nice!

Smita Kulkarni

Date: 2/9/2024 10:39:00 AM

Wow!! Magic of Mother Nature and the wildlife is truly amazing! Loved reading your beautiful poetry Len!! -Smita

Len Gasun
Date: 2/10/2024 3:57:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend Smita for reading my poem and your uplifting comments. Blessings to you always and your writings. Hugs

Len Gasun

Date: 2/4/2024 8:55:00 AM

Winter Magic - 8-12 Lines of Rhyme Contest Judged: 1/15/2024 12:00:00 AM Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Place 2 (up to 5 multi-w) POTD (Jan. 11,2024)

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/26/2024 6:36:00 PM

Dear Len, my poet friend, your appreciation for the beauty of Nature is expressed so wonderfully through your amazing Rhyme. Indeed, the "winter magic" of your vibrant imagery brings my imagination to the center of this sparkling scene with artistic ease and finesse. Every line a shining facet of a creative gem. Warmest wishes, my inspiring friend.. ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 2/6/2024 7:10:00 PM

Dear Len, my poet friend, I'm so sorry to know that you have gotten sick. I wish you a full and speedy recovery from your illness. Warmest wishes and belated congratulations for your exquisite poem being awarded a contest win and POTD honors. Your poetic artistry is worthy of all the accolades.. ~Susan

Len Gasun
Date: 2/4/2024 8:53:00 AM

My belated thanks from the bottom of my heart for reading my poem, your encouraging omments and warmest wishes my dear poet friend Susan. God bless you always. I'll be visiting you tomorrow ok. Sorry for the late expression of gratitude coz I got sick and hopefully, I'' fully recover soon. Sending you back warmest wishes too my dearest poet friend. Hugs.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 1/15/2024 7:18:00 AM

Len, I enjoyed the imagery of nature in this one, congratulations on your winning placement!

Len Gasun
Date: 2/4/2024 8:49:00 AM

Thank you so much for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Tania. Your approval on my poem trhough my win means a lot to me. God bles you always and your writings. Hugs

Kelly Deschler

Date: 1/14/2024 6:36:00 PM

A wonderful poem, Len, enchanting to read on this chilly, winter night :)

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 8:11:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging comment my dear poet friend Kelly. It's an honor and a great encouragement for me to get a recognition like this. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Charles Messina

Date: 1/12/2024 6:02:00 AM

Very nice, Len. Beautiful image...Congratulations on POTD. Charlie

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 8:06:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Charles. It's an honor and a great encouragement for me to get a recognition like this. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Jeanette Brewin

Date: 1/12/2024 12:22:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 8:05:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend. It's an honor and a great encouragement for me to get a recognition like this. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Silent One

Date: 1/11/2024 11:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your POTD with this winter magical poem..

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 8:05:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend SO for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/11/2024 6:53:00 PM

Ooh those last lines indeed are magical! Congratulations on POTD, Len!

Len Gasun
Date: 2/4/2024 8:57:00 AM

Belated thank you so much my dear poet friend Kim for reading my poem and your warm congratulatory greetings for my POTD recognition. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Robert Schatz

Date: 1/11/2024 6:08:00 PM

You really peg it Len! I like that you paint the scenes without commentary. Purely descriptive. Congratulations on POTD!

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 8:04:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Robert. It's an honor and a great encouragement for me to get a recognition like this. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Brandy Nicole

Date: 1/11/2024 5:57:00 PM

It's that time of year, when you feel a ' freezing breeze, while watching ' snowflakes shower like fountain. ' Moments are magical, indeed. Congratulations Len, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Brandy

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 8:03:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Brandy. It's an honor and a great encouragement for me to get a recognition like this. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Constance La France

Date: 1/11/2024 5:43:00 PM

Len, a wonderful write and congratulations on receiving POEM OF THE DAY, honor, Constance

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 8:03:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Constance. It's an honor and a great encouragement for me to get a recognition like this. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Tom Woody

Date: 1/11/2024 2:32:00 PM

Pretty poem Les. Enjoy your day

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 8:02:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your kind words my dear poet friend Tom. Enjoy your day too.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/11/2024 1:20:00 PM

very lovely, and big congrats on POTD, sweet friend.

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 7:59:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Andrea. It's an honor and a great encouragement for me to get a recognition like this. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 1/11/2024 9:57:00 AM

Lovely poem on the magic of Winter, Len. Congratulations on your POTD! Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 7:59:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Bill. It's an honor and a great encouragement for me to get a recognition like this. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 1/11/2024 9:23:00 AM

Terrific dear Len! That last stanza did it for me. Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 7:59:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Linda. It's an honor and a great encouragement for me to get a recognition like this. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 1/11/2024 8:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "Winter Magic" is a wonderful write/rhyme. Love It... Have Blessed day writing away.......................

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 7:58:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Paula. It's an honor and a great encouragement for me to get a recognition like this. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/11/2024 7:26:00 AM

Your poem so successfully describes the beauty of winter, the magic of snow. This is a happy read for a happy January day. Congratulations on your POTD.

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 7:57:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Hilda. It's an honor and a great encouragement for me to get a recognition like this. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Deb M

Date: 1/11/2024 7:17:00 AM

Oh so lovely Len….Congratulations on POTD!! Debx

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 6:25:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Deb. It's an honor and a great encouragement for me to get a recognition like this. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Christina Bowring

Date: 1/11/2024 6:51:00 AM

Dear, sweet Len, I am so happy to be able to say many congratulations for POTD for you today! What a gorgeous, enchanting, wintry poem. I love this! What captivating imagery you have skilfully penned. ‘Snow carpets’ hanging icicles’ ‘ crystal wand’s - so magical. A pure delight to read. Enjoy your celebratory day my sweet friend. You deserve it. Hugs and blessings xx :):)

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 6:23:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Christina. It's a great honor and a great encouragement for me to get a recognition like this. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 1/11/2024 6:49:00 AM

Great imagery, Len. I love that you used a bull elk in your last stanza, they are awe majestic creatures. Congratulations on POTD, well deserved.

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 6:22:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Eve. It's an honor and a great encouragement for me to get a recognition like this. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 1/11/2024 5:36:00 AM

Congratulations on receiving POTD! Well deserved

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 6:14:00 PM

Thank you so much for coming back to congratulate me on my POTD recognition my dear poet friend Ink. Most especially, thank you so much for constant support making this recognition possible. It's an honor and a great encouragement for me to get a recognition like this and I think you also for your many supports and great inspiration. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

John Lawless

Date: 1/11/2024 4:02:00 AM

"crystal wands and chimes in silent call" A winter version of Poet .....'those bells" Nicely done Len

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 6:13:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend John. It's an honor and a great encouragement for me to get a recognition like this. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 1/11/2024 3:55:00 AM

sounds like a beautiful sight, Leonara! Congratulations on your POTD designation!

Len Gasun
Date: 1/14/2024 6:12:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem, your encouraging comments and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Sara. It's an honor and a great encouragement for me to get a recognition like this. God bles you always and your writings. Hugs