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Winter Let's Us Hold Our Breath

Winter let's us hold our breath, and pause just inside the door, we spend more time at window frame watching the snowflakes fall. The slumber of trees and cars softens the noise on our ears, we slow, inhale, exhale, and wonder how every snowflake is formed. The painted days of softened hues blues on grays and faded yellows are an artist's muse and a friendly cue to wait for the coming of spring. Every hurried step may lead to a fall, every hurried kiss may lead to goodbye every hurried minute forfeits the surprise of crow squawking or coyote sniffing at the base of your door and the base of mind where questions need research and answers are hard to find and death and forever, wait like hunger to leads us elsewhere, lead us forever into the embrace of new, will we survive?

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Date: 2/18/2019 6:13:00 AM
Sheri, I am thinking after reading this poem - especially this part that you are an artist poet, and have been busy painting lately. Am I correct? "The painted days of softened hues blues on grays and faded yellows are an artist's muse and a friendly cue to wait for the coming of spring."
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Date: 2/27/2016 2:58:00 PM
every hurried minute forfeits the surprise of crow squawking or coyote sniffing This is so true. Beautiful poem
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Date: 2/27/2016 8:19:00 AM
Surreal...invites the reader to read and read and read again in the never-failing company of the personality of nature.
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Date: 2/25/2016 7:00:00 PM
Felt a bit nostalgic as i read what winter's capable of doing to us, and it's really refreshing after summer. wonderfully written.
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Date: 2/25/2016 4:08:00 PM
Hi Sheri, nice to know you: I love that way you articulate each approach to the seasons. My compliments!
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Date: 9/3/2012 8:22:00 AM
WOW! I loved te ending with a question at the end. So gratisfying, but yet sooo full of imagery and I truly treasure this poem! This is a aster piece right here. XD "at the base of your door and the base of mind where questions need research" I love that part of your poem (: Bye!
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Date: 11/29/2010 9:36:00 PM
JUst revisting this one. My favorite of your last several poems. Thanks for commenting to so many of mine. I wish I could stay longer and see more of yours. But I spend way too much time here. I gotta get myself off here now. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 11/26/2010 8:31:00 PM
wow, shen, I really like this one, and those assumptions you made in stanza four. REAlly good! LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/26/2010 7:02:00 PM
A beautiful poem with much to ponder. Welcome to this forum. Thank you for stopping to read and comment on my offering. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/12/2010 8:54:00 PM
A beautiful write with a piece of mystery to it. Hope your weekend will be a good one ;) Wilma
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Date: 11/12/2010 5:34:00 PM
Hope you have a good weekend and make that trip to charleston.
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Date: 11/12/2010 3:19:00 PM
Enjoyed the reading of your work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..I could feel the slowing of life to the soft drifting of the snowflakes..I was honored that you stopped by my work, read and commented...Sara
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Date: 11/12/2010 2:33:00 PM
I like your fourth stanza. There is content and mystery there and with a surreal touch. Love, dave
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