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Winter Is a Ghost

I see winter much like a ghost The cold and white I remember most. When spring arrives it just disappears But now it is snow and cold I fear. Haunting shadows from lifeless trees Set this mood that is inside me. I look around the world seems dead Visions of a ghost return to my head. I see a mist rise from the unfrozen pond I dream of a place that is far beyond. You know of its presence yet it’s not there I seek signs of life yet find them nowhere. It is cold I can see my breath in the air The cold wind sends shivers much like a scare. I think of a ghost like the past at my side I try to seek shelter it is warmer inside. The visions before me seems so real While the presence of a ghost I do feel. Winter is much like death renewal is spring Life shall be restored and the colors it brings.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/18/2011 9:33:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your poem, Mark. A unique yet recognizable view of winter. Nicely written. Kim
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Date: 12/18/2011 12:28:00 PM
Thank you Kim this was a challenge to do a personification of winter so glad you enjoyed it. You have me smiling:) Merry Christmas and thanks for the support........Mark
Date: 12/18/2011 9:25:00 AM
Visual beauty Mark, I just love how your describe Winter.. I especially love your last four lines ;)
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Date: 12/18/2011 12:30:00 PM
Thanks Wilma hope today finds you well, Because of people like you and including you I am..........Mark Merry Christmas !
Date: 12/18/2011 7:07:00 AM
I like this lots. Perhaps winter is indeed like a ghost. A nice piece of work here. I am indeed impressed. Now I would change the third line of your second verse to: "I look around me and the world seems dead' or "I look around and everything seems dead" It is just and idea, thanks for sharing your work with us, JancarlC.
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Date: 12/18/2011 12:32:00 PM
Thanks I will change that I like it:) Thank you for your help and Merry Christmas......Mark

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