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Winter In the African Sun

Winter in the African sun Feels like sizzling summer fun Come down to Durban beach And all your blues will be bleached This is South Africa’s playground We have a golden tan all year-round 05-08-2015 Thabang Jan Ngoma Sponsor: SKAT A Contest Name: The Answer (in less than 7 lines)

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Date: 8/28/2015 12:08:00 PM
The imagery in your piece arrests a moment of awe like a photo. Congrats to your wonderful WIN Thabang! ;-)
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Date: 8/19/2015 9:03:00 PM
oh you really make me want to be there!!Love this one.
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 8/19/2015 11:47:00 PM
Morning Andrea...I guess this does sound more like a promo than an actual poem lol..(:heers, Tbang
Date: 8/17/2015 11:20:00 PM
Thabang. Congratulations, on what you thought the Answer should be in less than 8 lines.... Always ~SKAT
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Date: 8/5/2015 2:31:00 AM
Thabang, such great lines vivid with delightful imagery!~Olive Eloisa =')
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 8/5/2015 5:02:00 PM
Hi Olive..thank you so much, glad you like it (:heers, Tbang
Date: 8/4/2015 5:23:00 PM
Lovely imagery Thabang good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Thabang Ngoma
Date: 8/4/2015 6:31:00 PM
Evening Jan...thanks lots, Tbang

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