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Winter Hawks

An advent of raptors haunts the scant gray woods or loiters over mall roofs. We wake to their screams as if this were high sierra, not Ohio where parents try-out or manage children, open party stores, hunker through the coming and going of baby Jesus; de-ice puffer jackets, tend to flocks. Gloom is plowed behind snow dunes. The red-tails roam in loose federations. Their young, mob-handed and loutish, the mature work in pairs scything small birds, ripping through the thinning, the hold-outs, the weakened and walking. And the first born listen with the last of us while the hawks dance proclaiming their time. A time of fervid litany and electric barricades, of bobble hats and mittens, while a black brier raises bloody thorns in chary praise. ~~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/4/2019 8:51:00 AM
This is powerful work with great images! Poetry power! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 3/13/2016 11:27:00 PM
Eric, Nice to read this one again. LINDA
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Date: 7/27/2015 1:20:00 PM
Eric, I enjoyed reading your poem today. I hope you are well. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/22/2013 6:35:00 PM
ERIC , a nice warm welcome to the soup. My name is Linda, many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you to one of my latest contest... called ---> "Only for the New Poets of 2013--the first poem you posted on the soup..." he he he Yes it has a long title. But, I want to give the new poets on the soup the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like please consider my contest. I love the enjoyment of meeting and reading the new poems from all new poets. Thank you for your time~ Always*LINDA
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Eric Ashford
Date: 3/23/2013 9:52:00 AM
Hi Linda, thanks for your kind review. Yes, please do enter the poem in your comp! Take care eric
Date: 3/14/2013 6:38:00 AM
Wow, this is something. It's so unique and has a mysterious quality to it. Welcome to the soup and keep up the good work!
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Eric Ashford
Date: 3/14/2013 10:22:00 AM
Thanks Caleb much obliged for the positive feedback.
Date: 3/13/2013 5:04:00 PM
This is an amazingly talented introduction to P/Soup. You have a way with words--keep writing !
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Eric Ashford
Date: 3/13/2013 5:24:00 PM
Thank you Kim, I fear it may be overwritten in parts and am open to any edit suggestions. I have just joined and am trying to figure out the forum. When I do I hope to add some comments and reviews on other folks works. Thanks again for your kind welcome.

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