Home » Poems » Sarban Bhattacharya » Winter Haiku 2

Winter Haiku 2

Down the frozen lake A baby trods thro' frail snow, His life is at stake.

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Afzal Nusker

Date: 10/14/2016 11:39:00 PM

When your poem is discussed by the senior members of Soup, you know what it means RIGHT...?

Afzal Nusker
Date: 1/19/2017 3:27:00 AM

I simply love your haiku poems.

Sarban Bhattacharya
Date: 10/25/2016 11:06:00 AM

What is your opinion , Afzal ?

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/15/2016 7:27:00 AM

Saw the discussion between Andrea and Sarban about tread and trod..Both are good but trod sounds harder here.. Good work..Thanks for dropping by..Sara

Sarban Bhattacharya
Date: 11/16/2016 12:33:00 AM

Welcome Sara .

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2016 10:24:00 AM

Do you mean treads? I think it would be cool if you could give the danger in the third line. Maybe 'the ice breaks!!" let me see your first limerick and then i need to move on to other poets! it's wonderful getting to know a new person at Soup.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/15/2016 7:29:00 AM

trod is correct when using an object and the snow is the object..Sara

Sarban Bhattacharya
Date: 9/10/2016 2:09:00 PM

Yes, 'treads'. Actually there is another verb 'trod' which means to walk laboriously.